tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37083420.post2737988413869346658..comments2024-01-27T16:10:28.502-08:00Comments on Tara Maya's Tales: Excerpt: The Unfinished Song, SacrificeTara Mayahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09095632631554776002noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37083420.post-56295843626473116072011-07-26T15:35:24.316-07:002011-07-26T15:35:24.316-07:00Ohh wonderfully unsettling!!! Great tale :)Ohh wonderfully unsettling!!! Great tale :)Sunshineshellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02157287671119047031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37083420.post-74383347537993582082011-07-25T16:55:06.244-07:002011-07-25T16:55:06.244-07:00This is nice, and it flows well. I like the detail...This is nice, and it flows well. I like the details, they accumulate well and the whole thing feels <i>solid</i>. I might like a few kinsmen's names in the hut-building paragraph, like the person who actually lit the fire maybe?<br /><br />This is creepy:<br /><br /><i>“I can be a baby if you prefer, Daddy. I can be any age you want.”</i><br /><br />It's the "Daddy" that makes it so.scott g.f.baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05726743149139510832noreply@blogger.com