"Luke, I am your father!"

I'm trying to decide whether to have a Darth Vader moment. I have a character who is looking for his dad in Book 3 (of Dindi). I have another character, who showed up in a completely different context in Book 1. Should they be related?

Disadvantages:

* My original idea was the dad would be from a particular tribe (not the same as the existing character)

* He also dances the wrong Chroma - I would have to either change his Chroma or change something else, to make it consistent

* Too many coincidences might seem hokey

* Dad was supposed to be real jerk, and this character is moderately heroic


Advantages:

* Tightens the story by connecting previously disconnected story threads.

* Reduces the number of characters

* A character who is sometimes a jerk and sometimes moderately heroic is more interesting


I think the last point is swaying me toward doing it. I'd probably want to end up redeeming the dad anyway -- I'm just a softy that way -- so why not save myself the trouble of agonizing over it and go in from the start with the knowledge this is a flawed rather than evil character?

Comments

Sara Raasch said…
I, personally, love when stories come full circle like that. It makes me really impressed that the author tied up even seemingly-small character lines and made the little things important. I say, go for it!
Tara Maya said…
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. :)
Sarah Jensen said…
I agree. Tightening up loose ends is great. I'm trying to do that with my novel as well. Having to rewrite most of book two.
I love your blog, btw.