Passing Time in Fiction
Following my post on middles, I reflected on what it is about the middle which is specifically giving me the most trouble. I've decided it's because the middle is where I need time to pass, without specifically showing it. The beginning runs fairly fast, over a few weeks, and the ending runs quickly as well -- over just a few days in fact. In the middle, however, nearly a year must pass.
You know those sequences in movies? Where they show montages of characters doing things, intersperced with pictures of the trees losing their leaves, growing frosty, then budding into green? How does one show this in a novel? Especially because I want the reader to have a sense of being right there with the characters all along, I don't want to say, "A year later..." because that feels like we've left the characters to their own devices for a year, then returned to them. I'd like to show little bits of scene and scenery every half dozen weeks as the year goes by, then return to the blow by blow action at the end.
And all of this is complicated by the fact that I'm juggling two timelines, because there's a flashback sequence interspliced with the main storyline.
What are your best techniques for passing time that you've used or read? Any ideas?
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I made it easy on myself in one manuscript - each chapter is a different month in the year. It was a neat concept that worked for that manuscript.
For the most part, when I'm skipping a few months in between . . . I try to start the chapter with "Over the last several months . . ." Once I've established the passage of time, I can fill in some of the details that happened over the course of the chapter.
I'm not sure how to help with the passage of a year, especially with multiple timelines going on, plus a flashback. Dang, you like the difficult things in life, don't you? ; )
S
Also, this published author
http://www.castingthebones.com/ has some great tips as well.
I definitely know what you mean, and I'm sorry to say I face the same problem. I don't have any great solutions to it either, but if you have a breakthrough, then I'd love to know. :-)
Crappy answer, I know. I think reading helps with this a lot. I like to pay attention to these things as I'm reading, and that usually gives me more and more ideas to work with.
"The snow was already melting and the grass was poking through our prior cart tracks when we returned by that place..."
"He was roughly four inches taller... had it already been two years?"
etc
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