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Mar 5, 2012

Killing Off Characters


I should know better than to watch Chinese movies, but I do anyway. Tragedy, comedy, romance, it doesn't matter. They always end with someone face first in the dust. What is with that?

It used to be that only Red Shirts would have to worry on Away Missions. In epic fantasy, they were known as the "spear holders." The bit players meant to die tragically, so the heroes could press stolidly onward. Now it's all the rage in fantasy to kill off major characters. Joss Whedon and George R.R. Martin and Joe Abercrombie whack major characters right and left, just to prove they can.

I really hate that.

The rationalization is that if you know the major characters won't die, this sucks the tension from the narrative. If the hero dangles from a cliff over a toxic ocean with a wyvern attacking from above and a kraken's tentacle grabbing at him from below, the reader is only going to believe he's really in danger if the author has proven I'm Really Serious This Time, This F#$^#r Could Die!!! 


Frankly, I don't buy it. Or rather, I'm just not interested in that kind of tension. Yes, there's always the possibility that the author could take a good story and ruin it by killing off my favorite character, but that's not the kind of story tension I find enjoyable. It's a matter of taste. Some readers want to trust that the author won't lead them to an ending that is unsurprising and unearned. Other readers want to trust that the author can deliver an ending that is, if not a complete Happily Ever After, at least deeply satisfactory. I'm firmly in the HEA department.

All of this may seem slightly hypocritical when I admit (being careful of spoilers) that one major character in The Unfinished Song does, ahem, die. Maybe two. Probably not more than two. A few readers have written to me, worried about some of the developments in Root, and asked point blank: "Does this story have a happy ending?" 

It does. And I don't mind saying that, because I'm not interested in keeping readers on tenderhooks on that point. The peril to the characters in the story is not whether they will die by the end of the book, but whether they will be true to themselves and to each other by the end of the book. To me that is a more interesting question, and the answer is more ambiguous.


The Lord of the Rings has a happy ending, and yet, at the same time, one of the saddest endings I have ever read. I never shed a tear for Romeo and Juliet, but after finishing Lord of the Rings (even though I've read it before), I feel moody and melancholy for days, as if the Elves have just departed in their ships and Middle Earth has newly died. Perhaps that's because a major character does die in Lord of the Rings: Middle Earth itself. Frodo succeeds and fails at the same time, and because of that, he can never be the same. It is even questionable whether he "lives" at the end of the story. It could be argued that the Elves are sailing for heaven--a euphemism for death. Frodo, like the Elves is going on to a "far, far better place." If that's not a bittersweet ending I don't know what is. Yet that works, whereas if Tolkien had decided to give the story a Chinese ending, and have Frodo kill himself at the end, or get shot full of arrows just as he threw the ring in the volcano, that would have been super duper lame.


I can't stand Faux Tragique. Where an author suddenly has a character die of cancer or commit suicide to make a story seem elevated and literary. There are well done tragedies, and well done stories about cancer, but what makes them well done is that they speak a truth about human experience, not that they prove their ruthlessness. Since not all human experiences involve cancer or suicide, it is indeed possible to speak a truth about human experience without killing characters.

There's a funny bit in The Kite Runner where the main character, while still a boy, reads his first short story to his friend. The story tells of a man who is promised riches if he can weep enough. So he kills his wife and weeps on a mountain of gold. His friend asked, "But why didn't he just cut onions?"

4 comments:

Donna Hole said...

Your last line truly got me :)

I know what you mean about killing characters for the effect. It is senseless.

I'm in the "satisfying ending" category. A good story, with characters that grow and experience life is the type of tension I like too - although sometimes major characters do require killing off to achieve that in others.

Writing the story well is the only way to make the death meaningful to me as a reader. I killed one of my main character's in my first novel, and I hope readers understand it is tragic, but necessary.

.....dhole

roguesqr09 said...

I'm torn on this topic. I loved comic books as a kid because some of the good and bad guys would get killed off, so it seemed more real to me, yet my favorites still lived. But now every comic character who has died has been reborn or brought back from the dead....at least twice.

However, I have read a book where my favorite character seemed to die at the end of the second book. Before I bought the 3rd, I looked ahead to make sure she lived, cause if she didn't, I would not have bought the 3rd book. I want the realism and the happy ending. Can't I have both? Perhaps not in our currently lives, which is why we go to fantasy.

On the subject of tension, it's important to move the story along and keep the reader interested, however I find myself having a nervous breakdown and chanting to myself 'the good guys will win in the end' as I'm reading about all the plans the evil doers are doing to kill off the good guys. I guess I'm like an addict. I want the tension, but need the happy ending.

Anjasa said...

I'm torn as well. I think most of it is in how it's handling. I tend not to like when characters die - I cry every single time - but I like variety. I don't think I'd like all of the books I read to not make me explore the full range of my emotions.

I don't know, it's complicated I guess. Just like I don't want people to kill their characters for no reason, I don't want it all to end happily for no reason. It's all in the writing.

Diana Fourall said...

Ah, the developments in Root. I
m still hoping there's an explanation around that. (WHY?????)