Writing: Don't Kill Your Story Tension With These Three Elements
The most important factor in a story that keeps readers reading is putting a good character in peril. The danger doesn't have to be physical. It could be emotional, financial, social, spiritual... but there has to be tension in the story. The reader thinks that they want the tension relieved, but actually, if the tension drops off, the reader grows bored. Yet sometimes, the writer, in a fit of misplaced pity for the character, forgets this cardinal rule, and tries to relieve tension for the character (reader), inadvertently killing the story tension. I've seen this done in a couple of ways. I'll list just three of them here, for now, and then suggest some remedies. Problem: The All-Awesome Main Character (a "Mary Sue" or "Marty Stew" This is the worst. If you have a character who's simply a stand-in for the fantasies of the author, to the point that this character never does wrong, is liked by everyone, wins every fight, develops new skills witho...