NaNoWriMo Tip #14: Onstage vs Offstage
This next outline
technique is brand-new to me. I just picked it up from the book How To Write aDamn Good Mystery by James Frey. I’ve been reading a slew of How To Write Mystery books because I’ve decided
to include a Mystery subplot in my YA urban fantasy, and I am clueless about
how to go about it. Wow, I wished I had learned this earlier. It’s good stuff.
I can see why this
style of Outline is of particular importance to mystery writers, but I think
it’s useful for anyone. The basic idea is that you are writing two stories: the
plot and the plot behind the plot.
There’s the action
that the reader sees. This is what happens “onstage.”
Then there’s what
happened a long time ago (backstory) or what is happening to other characters
besides the current PoV character. This is what happens “offstage.”
In the Onstage and
Offstage Outline, you write about both, in chronological order—not necessarily
the order that it will be revealed to the reader.
In a mystery, the
detective, and through her, the reader, is usually working backwards. The
murder has already taken place, and the detective has to re-create the event
through clues. The newbie author mistake is to write the book the same way.
Instead, the author needs to write a prequel and parallel book (in outline)
from the murderer’s PoV. The other suspects should also have their own, ongoing
storylines, most of which are offstage both before and during the onstage
action of the novel.
Like all brilliant
ideas, this is headsmackingly obvious once you think about it.
Could this
Offstage/Onstage idea be combined with the Post-It Outline? I’ve never tried
it, but the idea intrigues me. Another approach is to use an Excel or similar
spreadsheet program. Write down each characters name in a column and the time
and day in the rows and keep track of where each person is when. The more
complex your story is, and the more you need to rely on misdirection, the more
useful this kind of outline will be.
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