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Guest Post: ZINGERS AND SWORD-PLAY: How to Write Sabre-Sharp Dialogue for Fight Scenes

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Rayne Hall has published more than forty books under different pen names with different publishers in different genres, mostly fantasy, horror and non-fiction. Recent books include Storm Dancer (dark epic fantasy novel), Six Historical Tales Vol 1, Six Scary Tales Vol 1, 2 and 3 (mild horror stories), Six Historical Tales (short stories), Six Quirky Tales (humorous fantasy stories), Writing Fight Scenes and Writing Scary Scenes (instructions for authors). She holds a college degree in publishing management and a masters degree in creative writing. Currently, she edits the Ten Tales series of multi-author short story anthologies: Bites: Ten Tales of Vampires, Haunted: Ten Tales of Ghosts, Scared: Ten Tales of Horror, Cutlass: Ten Tales of Pirates, Beltane: Ten Tales of Witchcraft, Spells: Ten Tales of Magic and more.   Her short online classes for writers intense with plenty of personal feedback. Writing Fight Scenes, Writing Scary Scenes, Writing about Magic and...

Guest Post: Writing Sword Fight Scenes 101

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Rayne Hall  has published more than forty books under different pen names with different publishers in different genres, mostly fantasy, horror and non-fiction. Recent books include  Storm Dancer  (dark epic fantasy novel),  Six Historical Tales Vol 1, Six Scary Tales Vol 1, 2 and 3  (mild horror stories),  Six Historical Tales  (short stories),  Six Quirky Tales  (humorous fantasy stories),  Writing Fight Scenes  and  Writing Scary Scenes  (instructions for authors). She holds a college degree in publishing management and a masters degree in creative writing. Currently, she edits the  Ten Tales  series of multi-author short story anthologies:  Bites: Ten Tales of Vampires, Haunted: Ten Tales of Ghosts, Scared: Ten Tales of Horror, Cutlass: Ten Tales of Pirates, Beltane: Ten Tales of Witchcraft, Spells: Ten Tales of Magic  and more.   Her short  onlineclasses for writers  inte...

Finding the Best Word for the Job

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--> FINDING THE BEST WORD FOR THE JOB by Rayne Hall Specific words make a story vivid because they paint a clear picture for the reader. “ A woman with a dog” creates only a vague picture. By replacing “woman” and “dog” with specific   words you can bring your story alive:   “ A lady with a poodle” “ A tart with a mongrel” “ A gothgirl with a puppy” “ A redhead with a Rottweiler”   “ The man looked like a sports champion” is bland.   Show us what kind of man and what kind of sports, and the sentence becomes interesting: “ The gentleman looked like a fencing champion.” “ The thug looked like a boxing champion.” “ The salesman looked like a sumo champion.” Instead of the dull description with generic words “This garden is full of flowers of all kinds”   show the kind of flowers to paint a picture: “ This garden is full of roses, honeysuckles, and hollyhocks” - The reader sees a cottage garden. “ This garden is full...